life's Journey

[Bealz]

As we travel down life's pathway
A journey in itself.
Some choose to walk beside you,
Most times your by yourself.

Those that walk beside you,
Are worth there weight in gold,
Wanting nothing from you,
Except a hand that they can hold.

Some will walk beside you,
But leave when times are rough.
When life throws in a challenge,
that is difficult and tough.

We spend our journey searching for
Those pathways paved in gold.
To find that special someone,
Who'll be there when we are old.

Those that walk beside you,
are special lives indeed.
Those that choose to walk away,
Are lives that you don't need.

Bealz.
4 December 2013.

[Captain Starfish]

Nice pome. Are you 12?

[Bealz]

Nice pome. Are you 12?

No, but at least I can spell.

[Commander Keen]

Weed is a hell of a drug.

[Bealz]

Weed is a hell of a drug.

Yes it is.

[Morgs]

No, but at least I can spell.

Or maybe not! "worth there weight in gold"

[boeman]

Most times your by yourself.

I only got this far.

[Old frt]

Ease up guys, some nice sentiments there and it's the thought that counts.

Personally I thought it was shit...

[Captain Starfish]

Spell? Fkn really...

As we travel down life's pathway
A journey in itself.
Some choose to walk beside you,
Most times your by yourself.

Those that walk beside you,
Are worth there weight in gold,
Wanting nothing from you,
Except a hand that they can hold.

Some will walk beside you,
But leave when times are rough.
When life throws in a challenge,
that is difficult and tough.

We spend our journey searching for
Those pathways paved in gold.
To find that special someone,
Who'll be there when we are old.

Those that walk beside you,
are special lives indeed.
Those that choose to walk away,
Are lives that you don't need.

Bealz.
4 December 2013.

Life hints from this:
1. You're a grown up. You should know how to spell, not just how to check for red wiggly lines.
2. You're presumably an adult male. Now take the next step. Be a man. Self indulgent whiny tripe like this is not manly. Leave it to the women and the prepubescent boys floundering in hormones who at least have an excuse.

Or smoke less weed.

:edit: beaten like the OP ought to be re the spelling.

[Commander Keen]

[Phildo]

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
This poem doesn't rhyme,
And I don't give a shit.

[Munkers]

Keep going lads, this thread is shit loads better than Foxtel.

[TROUBLE]

This is why Guys DONT express their feelings.

Because other Guys SHIT on them



I think its a GREAT POEM

[boeman]

Men do express their feelings.

With handshakes (mateship), kisses (love), punches (hatred), gropes (love/lust) and beer (sadness/happiness).

[Captain Starfish]

There's a vast difference between a man expressing his feelings and being a whiny little emo bitch.

Part of becoming a man is learning that difference. And we're helping the poor kid do that learning. Because we're supportive, caring understanding nineties types.