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    As we travel down life's pathway
    A journey in itself.
    Some choose to walk beside you,
    Most times your by yourself.

    Those that walk beside you,
    Are worth there weight in gold,
    Wanting nothing from you,
    Except a hand that they can hold.

    Some will walk beside you,
    But leave when times are rough.
    When life throws in a challenge,
    that is difficult and tough.

    We spend our journey searching for
    Those pathways paved in gold.
    To find that special someone,
    Who'll be there when we are old.

    Those that walk beside you,
    are special lives indeed.
    Those that choose to walk away,
    Are lives that you don't need.

    Bealz.
    4 December 2013.

  • #2
    Nice pome. Are you 12?
    "Once upon a time we would obey in public, but in private we would be cynical; today, we announce cynicism, but in private we obey."

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Captain Starfish View Post
      Nice pome. Are you 12?

      No, but at least I can spell.

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      • #4
        Weed is a hell of a drug.
        Originally posted by Desmo
        Why be a cunt about it?

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Commander Keen View Post
          Weed is a hell of a drug.
          Yes it is.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by Bealz View Post
            No, but at least I can spell.
            Or maybe not! "worth there weight in gold"
            Adventure before Dementia

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            • #7
              Originally posted by Bealz View Post
              Most times your by yourself.
              I only got this far.

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              • #8
                Ease up guys, some nice sentiments there and it's the thought that counts.

                Personally I thought it was shit...

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                • #9
                  Spell? Fkn really...

                  Originally posted by Bealz View Post
                  As we travel down life's pathway
                  A journey in itself.
                  Some choose to walk beside you,
                  Most times your by yourself.

                  Those that walk beside you,
                  Are worth there weight in gold,
                  Wanting nothing from you,
                  Except a hand that they can hold.

                  Some will walk beside you,
                  But leave when times are rough.
                  When life throws in a challenge,
                  that is difficult and tough.

                  We spend our journey searching for
                  Those pathways paved in gold.
                  To find that special someone,
                  Who'll be there when we are old.

                  Those that walk beside you,
                  are special lives indeed.
                  Those that choose to walk away,
                  Are lives that you don't need.

                  Bealz.
                  4 December 2013.
                  Life hints from this:
                  1. You're a grown up. You should know how to spell, not just how to check for red wiggly lines.
                  2. You're presumably an adult male. Now take the next step. Be a man. Self indulgent whiny tripe like this is not manly. Leave it to the women and the prepubescent boys floundering in hormones who at least have an excuse.

                  Or smoke less weed.

                  :edit: beaten like the OP ought to be re the spelling.
                  "Once upon a time we would obey in public, but in private we would be cynical; today, we announce cynicism, but in private we obey."

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by Desmo
                    Why be a cunt about it?

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                    • #11
                      Roses are red,
                      Violets are blue,
                      This poem doesn't rhyme,
                      And I don't give a shit.
                      One owner. Only driven gently on Sundays. Sold to best offer. First to see will buy. Reward offered for safe return. Coming soon to a cinema near you. Available for a limited time only.

                      My waterbed broke this morning. Oh, I don't have a waterbed. Bugger.

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                      • #12
                        Keep going lads, this thread is shit loads better than Foxtel.
                        If at first you don't succeed, dont bother taking up sky diving.
                        This unit is portable when carried.
                        it wasn't a normal cookie, i figured that out 45 minutes into my exam.

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                        • #13
                          This is why Guys DONT express their feelings.

                          Because other Guys SHIT on them



                          I think its a GREAT POEM
                          What You See

                          Isn't always what you get

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                          • #14
                            Men do express their feelings.

                            With handshakes (mateship), kisses (love), punches (hatred), gropes (love/lust) and beer (sadness/happiness).

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                            • #15
                              There's a vast difference between a man expressing his feelings and being a whiny little emo bitch.

                              Part of becoming a man is learning that difference. And we're helping the poor kid do that learning. Because we're supportive, caring understanding nineties types.
                              "Once upon a time we would obey in public, but in private we would be cynical; today, we announce cynicism, but in private we obey."

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